Could have been better.

Haha funny.

The truth hurts...Haha. Like a wise person once said, "Better graphics doesn't make a better game." *cough Final Fantasy *cough

This is a great melody! It's twisted in a few notes to make it sound gloomy and mysterious. This is awesome. I just love it. It could be done differently on some parts, but it's great for now. I can definitely hear it in a video game like Castlevania, Kingdom Hearts, or Legend of Zelda.

The vocals are just beautiful. Alisa Hight has the voice of a goddess. Because I'm not fond of techno or electric, in my personal opinion, the song can do without it. You should try more than one version. I like the chill pieces more because the chill music is melodic and smooth which parallels to the lyrics.

The beginning needs work, but this is a great musical piece. It has the rights elements, but you need to work a little more with sound enhancements. It has potential. I been waiting for this kind of version. It's just beautiful but needs little more work. :)