This sounds GREAT, but the drums seem off by one too many beats... It sounds like you added an extra beat or two in the 6-beat drums (following the original version). The beat of the drum is off rhythm slightly. I think the sound should be enhanced for the drum a bit more when the drum rolls fast in parts throughout the song (for example, in 00:32:-0033) cuz it will give more power to the song, and then reduced when it's performing the slow beats in the background. :) This is ONE of my personal favorites of the game because I'm all about this type of exotic ambient music which is why I gave so much analization in your piece too. Lol You did great in the quality overall--it sounds more exotic than the original-- but it still needs more editing.